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    Default Which sentence is grammartically correct?

    In a particularly bold yet calculated move, he purchased with his savings, his first store at Mumbadevi, Zaveri Bazaar in the year 1962.

    In a particularly bold yet calculated move, he purchased the first store at Mumbadevi, Zaveri Bazaar in the year 1962 with all his savings.

    In a calculated move, he purchased with his savings, his first store at Mumbadevi, Zaveri Bazaar in the year 1962.

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    Default Re: Which sentence is grammartically correct?

    After a little nip and tuck, this looks good to me:
    In a particularly bold yet calculated move, he purchased with his savings his first store at Mumbadevi, Zaveri Bazaar, in the year 1962.

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