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    Please check my small paragragh

    We pride ourselves on providing our customers with the best customer service. Whatever we are today, itís only with the support of our customerís trust and loyalty. We know to sustain our growth momentum, we need to go beyond customerís expectations, and we are exactly doing that. Please feel free to visit us personally or contact us by telephone / email if you have any queries.


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    Re: Please check my small paragragh

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    We pride ourselves on providing our customers with the best customer service. Whatever we are today, itís only with the support of our customerís trust and loyalty. [We know (drop these unnecessary words)] To sustain our growth momentum, we need to go beyond our customerís expectations, and we are doing exactly that. Please feel free to visit us personally or contact us by telephone / email if you have any questions.
    I assume you mean questions rather than queries, although perhaps that's a British expression.

    In fact, you might really mean to say "concerns."

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