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    diversea is offline Newbie
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    Arrow please make corrections of this paragraph

    PLEASE CORRECT THIS PARAGRAPH.

    With referance to this application, I wish to inform you, that I have applied for five years multiple visa It will be much appriciated if you could grant me five years multiple visa to visit my daughter in UK, I am eldarly person and as it would be much convanient, easy, saving time and money to me.

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    Re: please make corrections of this paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by diversea View Post
    PLEASE CORRECT THIS PARAGRAPH.

    With referance to this application, I wish to inform you, that I have applied for five years multiple visa It will be much appriciated if you could grant me five years multiple visa to visit my daughter in UK, I am eldarly person and as it would be much convanient, easy, saving time and money to me.
    Hello Diversea,
    Hope this would help you :)

    With reference to this application I would like to inform you that I have applied five years multiple visa for UK. It will be appreciated if you could grant me five years multiple visa to visit my daughter there. I am an elderly person so it would be much convenient, easy, saving time and money to me.

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    Re: please make corrections of this paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by diversea View Post
    PLEASE CORRECT THIS PARAGRAPH.

    With referance to this application, I wish to inform you, that I have applied for five years multiple visa It will be much appriciated if you could grant me five years multiple visa to visit my daughter in UK, I am eldarly person and as it would be much convanient, easy, saving time and money to me.

    I am applying for a multiple entry visa to occasionally visit my daughter in the UK. I'll greatly appreciate if the visa is approved for a duration of five years or longer. Please note that I am an elderly person, and having a five year visa would relieve me of the unnecessary costs and time associated with frequent visa renewals.
    Last edited by greenisgood; 08-Jan-2010 at 17:42.

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    Re: please make corrections of this paragraph

    Thanks budy. also I have received email too.

    Quote Originally Posted by greenisgood View Post
    I am applying for a multiple entry visa to occasionally visit my daughter in the UK. I'll greatly appreciate if the visa is approved for a duration of five years or longer. Please note that I am an elderly person, and having a five year visa would relieve me of the unnecessary costs and time associated with frequent visa renewals.

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    Re: please make corrections of this paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by diversea View Post
    Thanks budy. also I have received email too.
    Good work greenisgood :) Congrats to Diversea :)

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