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    Are these sentences grammatically correct?

    "I've started the download but there aren't many people who are offering to share the file which means the downloading process will be slow.

    I doubt my connection can upload all 717Mb of the movie so I will have to give you the video via USB. All will be done on the assumption that I can download this video on time."

    I have a friend who wanted to know if these sentences were grammatically correct. I underlined the part I wasn't too sure of.

    Red = Diction
    Blue = Subject-verb agreement

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    Re: Are these sentences grammatically correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by masterthief1324 View Post
    "I've started the download but there aren't many people who are offering to share the file which means the downloading process will be slow.

    I doubt my connection can upload all 717Mb of the movie so I will have to give you the video via USB. All will be done on the assumption that I can download this video on time."

    I have a friend who wanted to know if these sentences were grammatically correct. I underlined the part I wasn't too sure of.

    Red = Diction
    Blue = Subject-verb agreement
    I can't see a problem with the coloured bits.

    The first sentence needs a comma after 'file'. Otherwise you are are talking about "a file which means the downloading process will be slow". Such a file probably doesn't exist, and if it did, it is probably not what you're after.
    That is, you need a comma to convert this defining clause into a non-defining clause.

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