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    #1

    Smile Could someone please check my POEM

    Life Is Good
    I was running through the way
    I was thinking it's okay
    Not knowing what to say
    Though I found a lovely display
    Written on it have a happy life stay
    Then I heard an awesome deejay
    Two people came and gave me a dray
    I saw in it a card that was belayed
    So I toke it and saw a writing overlay
    It was written on it "peace upon you and not affray
    Take it easy and if it is not now it's today
    Therefore enjoy your life and have a brilliant day"
    So this is the life, don't give it away

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      • English Teacher
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    #2

    Re: Could someone please check my POEM

    Wanna check grammar? rhyme?

    It sounds a nice one!

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