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    Thumbs up Revise my CV please!

    Hello

    I would like to request for a help. I wrote me CV sample here, could you please check and give me your comments. I would love your comments.
    Thanks beforehand!



    Toshev Farrukh

    Date of birth: December 24th, 1986
    Nationality: Tajik
    Martial Status: Single

    Objective To implement the best of my knowledge and skills for the benefit of your organization?s goals and principles
    Education

    Dates: 2004-2009
    University: Tajik State University
    Specialization: Economics of enterprises
    Main courses: Economics, Mathematics, English, and Computer science
    Qualifications: Degree of specialist in above field

    Dates: 1999-2004
    School: Lyceum#1, Istaravshan
    Qualifications: Attestation of high school completion

    Dates: 1997-1999
    School: Lyceum#2, Istaravshan

    Dates: 1993-1997
    School: Secondary school #20, Istaravshan
    Qualifications: Attestation of elementary school completion

    Employment

    Dates: September 2004 ? present
    Company: Relief International Schools on line (RISOL)
    Position: On-Site Monitor (OSM)
    Responsibilities: Training students of secondary schools, monitoring community access to internet, assist secondary school teachers to participate in forums, leading seminars about computers, internet, importance of English, and others

    Dates: August 2004 ? September 2004
    Company: Central Asian Development Agency (CADA)
    Position: Volunteer
    Responsibilities: Help subscribers to open account in E-mail, how to work with it, register them
    Skills: Good typing skills in English (40-50 words) and in Russian (20-25 words), customer oriented, good communication skills, ability to work under pressure and independently with little guidance, effective team player, paying spectacular attention to details and following procedures, willing to work overtime if needed.

    Computer All Microsoft Office programs (Office 97, 2000, XP, 2003), Adobe Photoshop, Corel Draw, Macromedia Dreamweaver, Internet Explorer, Installation (can install operating systems including: Windows 95, 98, Me, XP), Understand system unit

    Languages Tajiki (Native), English (fluent), Russian (excellent), Spanish
    (basics)

    Achievements

    Date: 2003-2004
    Award: Finalist of FSAFLEX scholarship

    Date: March 2003
    Award: 1st place in Regional Olympiad of English

    Date: January 2003
    Award: Certificate of Computer course completion in Small Business Institute

    Interests Improve work skills and learn more about various computer programs, help people to the best of my ability

    E-mail:
    Tel: (+992 3454) 2 27 79
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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Default Re: Revise my CV please!

    Some Ideas

    Toshev Farrukh

    Date of birth: December 24th, 1986
    Nationality: Tajik
    Marital Status: Single
    Gender?

    Objective: To implement the best of my knowledge and skills for the benefit of your organization?s goals and principles
    To be honest, I'd change this Objective- flattery will get you nowhere. Why not say what you expect to get out of the job?

    Education

    Dates: 2004-2009
    University: Tajik State University
    Specialization: Business Economics
    Main courses: Economics, Mathematics, English, and Computer science
    Qualifications: Degree of specialist - this doesn't really mean much to me- is it a Bachelor's degree or a Master's? in above field

    Dates: 1999-2004
    School: Lyceum#1, Istaravshan
    Qualifications: Attestation of high school completion

    Dates: 1997-1999
    School: Lyceum#2, Istaravshan

    Dates: 1993-1997
    School: Secondary school #20, Istaravshan
    Qualifications: Attestation of elementary school completion

    Employment

    Dates: September 2004 ? present
    Company: Relief International Schools on line (RISOL)
    Position: On-Site Monitor (OSM)
    Responsibilities: Training students of secondary schools, monitoring community access to internet, assisting secondary school teachers to participate in forums, leading seminars about computers, internet, importance of English, and others

    Dates: August 2004 ? September 2004
    Company: Central Asian Development Agency (CADA)
    Position: Volunteer
    Responsibilities: Help subscribers to open E-mail accounts, teaching them how to work with it, registering them (for what?)
    Skills: Good typing skills in English (40-50 words) and in Russian (20-25 words), customer oriented, good communication skills, ability to work under pressure and independently with little guidance, effective team player, paying close attention to details and following procedures, willing to work overtime if needed.

    IT skills:
    All Microsoft Office programs (Office 97, 2000, XP, 2003), Adobe Photoshop, Corel Draw, Macromedia Dreamweaver, Internet Explorer, Installation (can install operating systems including: Windows 95, 98, Me, XP), Understand system unit (what's this??)

    Languages Tajiki (Native), English (fluent), Russian (excellent), Spanish
    (basics)

    Achievements

    Date: 2003-2004
    Award: Finalist of FSAFLEX scholarship

    Date: March 2003
    Award: 1st place in Regional Olympiad of English

    Date: January 2003
    Award: Certificate of Computer course completion in Small Business Institute

    Interests: Improving my professional work skills and learning more about various computer programs, helping people to the best of my ability (is this really an interest?)

    E-mail:
    Tel: (+992 3454) 2 27 79

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