[Vocabulary] put details /bully points on slides

[uktous]

Hi,

Question:
Are my sentence correct?

Sentence1:
We should put as many details as possible on our PowerPoint slides.
Sentence2:
We should put only few bully points on our PowerPoint slides.


Thanks

 

[Linguist__]

(Not a teacher)

The first is fine.

The second:

We should put only a few bullet points on our PowerPoint slides.

I'm not sure if it's a grammatical thing or just style, but it sounds 'better' as 'we should only put...'.

Also, I would use 'in' a slide, rather than 'on', but again, it might be personal preference.