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abhilasha03

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Timothy began to notice that the prisoner's state of health was deteriorating

Should this be "
Timothy began to notice that the prisoner's health was deteriorating"

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Timothy began to notice that the prisoner's state of health was deteriorating

Should this be "
Timothy began to notice that the prisoner's health was deteriorating"

No, it means the same.
 
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