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    Need help to edit my draft letter

    Hello All,

    Please find time to edit my draft letter, I need this ASAP. Many many thanks in advance.

    DATE : January 23, 2009

    TO : Mr. Bai Tarrow
    Tarrow Company

    Telephone No. :

    Fax No. :

    SUBJECT : Arrange Communication for Future Contracts
    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    Dear Mr. Trrow,

    Greetings…

    Please arrange communication for our future contracts. Kindly be advised also that we will be having a signing of contract next week in Riyadh.

    For further details, please feel free to get in touch with the undersigned.

    Looking forward for your valuable reply as soon as possible.


    Sincerely yours,


    Dr. Nil E. Hobbins



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    Re: Need help to edit my draft letter

    Quote Originally Posted by Eugene1982 View Post
    Hello All,

    Please find time to edit my draft letter, I need this ASAP. Many many thanks in advance.

    DATE : January 23, 2009

    TO : Mr. Bai Tarrow
    Tarrow Company
    Telephone No. :

    Fax No. :

    SUBJECT : Arrange Communication for Future Contracts
    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    Dear Mr. Trrow,

    Greetings…

    Please arrange communication for our future contracts. Kindly be advised also that we will be having a signing of contract next week in Riyadh.

    For further details, please feel free to get in touch with the undersigned.

    Looking forward for your valuable reply as soon as possible.


    Sincerely yours,


    Dr. Nil E. Hobbins

    Hi, there

    You are kindly requsted to make all necessary arrangements concerning our communication. We would also like to inform you that we will be signing a contract next week in Riyad.
    For further details ......Ok
    Looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.

    Hope I have been helpful. Just one comment; I understand that in your native language you tend to be very polite- that is why you wrote valuable answer- but in formal letters or business ones, the language is polite but in a strict way. So, I wouldn't write valuable answer in a business letter, though I understand your point.

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    Re: Need help to edit my draft letter

    Many thanks 1984law. It really helped me a lot.

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