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Date : 20 January 2010
To :aaaaa
From :bbbb
Subject : Bed R Commercial Center
Dear Engr. aaaaa,
Good day to you!
May we request from you based on the abovementioned project containing the full package of drawings, bill of quantities especially structural BOQ.
For further details, please feel free to communicate with the undersigned.
We are looking forward for your valuable reply as soon as possible.
Many thanks and best regards,

Engr. bbbbb