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    correct my sentence / the burn was ....

    The burn was deep and


    the shock was very strong on my


    mom


    Are there any mistakes in this sentence

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    Re: correct my sentence / the burn was ....

    Quote Originally Posted by mefa View Post
    The burn was deep and


    the shock was very strong on my


    mom


    Are there any mistakes in this sentence
    Which sentence?

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