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    Default IELTS ESSAY HELP: Pre-schools and Kindergarten

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    IELTS

    Some people believe that pre-schools and kindergartens should
    start teaching children basic subjects such as maths, writing
    even computers. Others think that these schools should mainly
    focus on activities such as games, painting, music, and play.

    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


    Every student has his likes and dislikes in terms of subjects
    taught in school. Some excel in one area while others excel
    on a different field of learning. There are people believing
    that fundamental subjects like maths, writing, and computers
    should be the focus of teaching, while others feel that there
    is a need to concentrate more on games, painting, music, and
    play for pre-schools and kindergartens.

    If we try to observe the youngsters, they love subjects
    involving play than those needing of critical thinking.
    Children easily get bored of doing activities requiring them
    to sit for long minutes or even hours. They like being active
    most of the time.

    With regards to the issue of areas of focus in teaching,
    there should be balance. At the early age of a child,
    introduction of many activities of learning is a good way to
    know what interests him/her. Moreover, we discover his/her
    strenghts and weaknesses. This way teachers can help young
    students to develop and excel on areas of better performance
    and to work more on areas needing improvement.

    When we look of some successful people like the late Michael
    Jackson and Steven Spielberg, both on entertainment
    industries, they started developing their skills and talents
    at a very young age and later in life became the best figures
    of what they do. One contributing factor is they enjoy their
    actions. Same way to train a child and to bring out his best
    and not forcing him to take something, but out of his heart
    in reality.

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    Default Re: IELTS ESSAY HELP: Pre-schools and Kindergarten

    So is that a "Yes, teachers should start teaching children basic subjects such as maths, writing even computers", or "No, they should mainly focus on activities such as games, painting, music, and play"?



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