Hi there, I am not sure what your paper is about and so it is hard to check it correctly but if I was you I would write it this way.
While writing this, I learnt a lot about business in Ireland. I learnt what forms of business there were and what the different roles of staff are in individual parts of the company. Furthermore, I learnt how technological development influences the working of a business. While writing this paper I utilized the internet, which turned out to be a gold mine of information. However, not all search pages contained information that matched the headlines.
hope this helps
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