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    Is there anyone y who can please check my letter here? many thanks in advance

    Dear Mr. Aaaaa Bbbbb,
    First and foremost, I would like to acknowledge the receipt of your email dated February 5, 2010.
    Indeed, it was my pleasure for inviting you here in my office last few months ago wherein were able to talk personally and discuss possible business partnership between CCCCC and our company.
    I am also grateful that your company has considered us to collaborate with in the next future thru a project-by-project basis as what had been transpired in your internal discussion with your group.
    Further, allow me to extend a warm congratulation to CCCCC new Representative Director and President, Mr. Ddddd Eeeee.
    I would be more delighted to seeing you again here in Saudi Arabia. You and your group are most welcome.
    I am looking forward that we’ll continue to explore new opportunities to work with here in Saudi Arabia.
    Many thanks.

    Sincerely yours,

    Engr. Fffff Ggggg
    General Manager

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    befairinlife is offline Newbie
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    Re: Is there anyone y who can please check my letter here? many thanks in advance

    I have read your draft letter and seem to be partly not ok. A few grammatical errors to be corrected.

    I am giving my comments based on my English grammar knowledge.

    Take care.

    Mohammed Rasheed
    Bahrain

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    Re: Is there anyone y who can please check my letter here? many thanks in advance

    Thanks for a million gillnetter and befairinlife. Your inputs really mean a lot to me.

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