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[gozuhair]

Respected Sir,

This is to inform you that I had applied for Canadian Immigration with my family few years ago, couple of days ago I have received my Visa form Canadian Consulate Islamabad which would be expired on 23rd of April 2010. Therefore I have to leave with my family on or before this date.

Sir, I would like to avail this option in order to file at least my Permanent Residence Card by reaching there. This whole procedure will require approximately 6 months to get completed there in Canada.

Sir, in order to make an entry in Canada, I don’t want to quit my job and would like to continue my services with Dewan Farooque Motors Ltd.

Therefore, I would require a minimum leave period of 6 months (without salary) in order to file at least my PRC as mentioned above.

I would be highly obliged for your co-operation in this regard.

Thanking you in anticipation.

Regards,

 

[RonBee]

Respected Sir,

This is to inform you that I [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] applied for Canadian immigration with my family a few years ago. A couple of of days ago I [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE] received my Visa from the Canadian Consulate in Islamabad. The visa wil expire on the 23rd of April 2010. Therefore I have to leave with my family on or before that date.

Sir, I would like to avail this option in order to file at least my Permanent Residence Card by reaching there.

I don't understand that sentence. I suggest that you rewrite it.

 

[gozuhair]

First of all, thanks for the reply,actually in the below sentence i want to tell that i have to generate some documents in Canada in order to generate canada Nationality like prc ,please help how to write this sentence in a good manner.

Sir, I would like to avail this option in order to file at least my Permanent Residence Card by reaching there.

 

[RonBee]

Simplify, please! Are you saying that you want to eventually become a Canadian citizen? Perhaps:
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I want to take this opportunity to file papers to obtain permanent residency.
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That should do the trick.

 

[gozuhair]

Thank you very much for help