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    Default Please correct my sentence

    I am currently looking for a part-time job position in the morning or full-time job with a one-year contract position. If this contract position falls into the category above, then it would be great. Otherwise, please email me jobs opening in the future that are suitable. I appreciate your help.

    Thank you for your time.

    Are you writing to an employer or a job agency?
    Last edited by Tdol; 14-Apr-2005 at 02:25.

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    Default Re: Please correct my sentence

    I am writting this for recruitment manager in services staff. Is this considered job agency or employer. I am not sure about it. But I think this is job agency.

    thanks.

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    Default Re: Please correct my sentence

    Otherwise, please email me jobs opening in the future that are suitable. I appreciate your help.

    This part needs changing, IMO, if you are writing to the company. I would say:

    I would be grateful if you would keep my application on file for any future openings.


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