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    #1

    Suggestions for my mail

    Dear Bruno,

    How are you ?. I hope you are fine. I met Sivakumar.P(satti) couple of months back and
    started talking about our school days. I heard from him that you are working in Satyam Computers .

    A short story about me after 10th std from Vivekananda School I joined +2 for MHSS and after MHSS I completed my Business Management in PSG Arts college, coimbatore. After college I wrote Chartered Accountant exams and I cannot get through. Soon with partners I started finance business(Financing for Vehicles) and we have running the business successfully for more than 10 years. In 2003 I married deepika and we have lovely daughter deeksha (3 years) both my daughter and sivakumar’s son are studying in Euro Kids.


    Its funny to remind you that we used dance in ground for (silly) song.

    Keep in touch with me.

    Regards

    Kindly give the valuable suggestion for my mail
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    #2

    Re: Suggestions for my mail

    A short story about me- this suggests that the rest is fiction. I think you could just delete it.

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    #3

    Re: Suggestions for my mail

    Quote Originally Posted by Gillnetter View Post
    You may want to review how "in" and "at" are used in English.
    Would you explain me where to use "in" and "at" in English

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    #4

    Re: Suggestions for my mail

    i dont understand

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