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    Default revising of a few sentences 9

    Dear teachers,

    Would you be kind enough kind to revise the following sentences?

    His embarrassment was so obvious that it left no doubt as to his quilt.
    His embarrassment was obvious enough to leave no doubt as to his quilt.
    The old woman is so proud that she never pries into secrets of her children.
    The old woman is too proud to pry into secrets of her children..
    I don’t nave enough money for a vacation.
    I don’t have enough money to take a vacation.
    He wasn’t experienced for the job.
    He wasn’t experienced enough to do the job.
    This shirt is too big for me. I need a smaller size.
    Let’s take a taxi. It’s too far to walk.
    The food was so hot that we couldn’t eat it.
    The food was too hot to eat.
    I had to carry mu wallet in my hand. It was too big to put in my pocket.
    That picture is too heavy to hang on the wall.
    The water wasn’t clean enough to swim in.

    Thank you for your efforts.

    Regards,

    V.

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    Default Re: revising of a few sentences 9

    All sentences are OK.

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    Default Re: revising of a few sentences 9

    Alternative:I don’t have enough money to go on a vacation

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