***neither a teacher nor a native speaker***
This is my second writing in the forum. I expect the comment on sentence structure and grammar of the writing. I would like to thank you in advance.
We can't underestimate the role of cell phones in our daily
lifelives. The cCell phones have really changed our life style and itthey make sour lifelives more convenientcomfortable and more qualit ativey. If you miss your friend and want to in touch with them, just pick up your cell and dial the number, you will get your friend at your disposal. If you are going to attend a program and got struck in the traffic then you can inform the situation to the organizer, using your cell phone. All these scenarioes reveal the importance of a cell phone(or cell phones). The cCell phones not only facilitate sthe citylife in the city but also makes the country'slife in the country easier. I would like to describe a situation here(areal one or an imaginary one?).(If you are to describe an imaginary one , then start with "Let's say") A farmer has some buffaloes. One day some buffaloes werewent miss eding while he was taking them for grazing. He immediately called people in his neighbouring village and described abouthis buffaloes. Luckily, the buffaloes that thought to be missing were passing by that village. A person whom the farmer called has restrained the buffaloes and finally the farmer came to take tookthem to his houseranch. This anecdote illustrates how cell phones ismay help ingin rural life toojust like they do in that of the city. In conclusion, the cell phone technology has made our li fe vesa better place to live and we need to greetsalute those who have spent their li feves to make thethings in present stateeasier for us .
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