Here are a few changes. Note that I'm not a teacher and this still needs correction in some places.Young people leave the countryside
amodern times there are more and more gigantic cities all around the globe. Even lots of suburb areas in a just few years (just in a few years - better put at the end of the sentence) became parts of large cities or city affiliations. (what is city affiliations?) Globalization is constantly spreading and especially young people (it's better to omit 'especially' here or try: 'a lot of people, especially the younger generation) want to be a part of it. The easiest way of life is to live in modern cities where everything is avaliable in a few meters. (just a few meters away from home)
Also the easiest ('best' would be a better word) place to find a job is a city, because of the large population and variet
yies of interestjobs. There are much more connections between people and, therefore, more people es thatcan help you in some way. Cities are very attractive to theyoung people because of it'stheir urban lifestyle. For most of young people countrysides are too boring, they like to party all day long inat discos and dance clubs. In cities everything is very dynamic, there is no time tofor sleep - and young people like that type of lifestyle.
On the other hand, when
that sameyoung people get older, therethey are movingmove to the countrysides, because cities are for them now overcrowded (because cities seem too overcrowded for them) They arebecome saturated ofwith socialsociety, (however, I'd suggest 'they become tired of society') nowand theywant to have peaceful family lifelives. If they stay edin towncities, they wouldn'tdo not get opportunit yies to relax and enjoy their lives in theirs oldnessin old age.
My opinion is that the combination of city/urban life in young age and contryside/family life in old age is the best combination. I support the headline (headline of what?) because I think that young people have much more opportunities
they need edin cit yies than in the countrysides. Countryside is reservedfor a healthy life in old age s.
If someone can check my little "essay" I would be very grateful. Thank you very much
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