how can i write a letter to request student pass

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bayara_mine

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Hello, i've to write a letter requesting student pass to ICA.
Bur i don't know how to write well. Please give me some advise and help me.
[FONT=&quot]Dear Sir or Madam,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I am 23 years old and graduated from Mongolian National University as a Mongolian – English translator and researcher in 2009. I would like to study at human resource field for master degree ( if possible ) in Singapore. But I think my English is not enough good to study at university. For this reason, I have to perfect my English knowledge – especially spoken language. That’s why I applied for LP Language School. I would be grateful if you would approve my student pass. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I enclose photocopy of my bachelor degree’s diploma and document of security money. [/FONT]
Please correct it and send me your valuable advice.:)
 

kfredson

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Hello, i've to write a letter requesting student pass to ICA.
Bur i don't know how to write well. Please give me some advise and help me.
[FONT=&quot]Dear Sir or Madam,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I am 23 years old and I graduated [/FONT][FONT=&quot]in 2009[/FONT][FONT=&quot] from Mongolian National University as a Mongolian – English translator and researcher [/FONT][STRIKE]in 2009[/STRIKE][FONT=&quot]. I would like to [/FONT][STRIKE]study at[/STRIKE][FONT=&quot] pursue a Master's degree in the field of human resources [/FONT][STRIKE]field for master degree[/STRIKE][FONT=&quot] ( if possible ) in Singapore. But I think my English is not enough good to study at the university. For this reason, I have to perfect my English knowledge – especially the spoken language. That’s why I have applied for LP Language School. I would be grateful if you would approve my student pass. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I enclose a photocopy of my bachelor degree’s diploma and a document of security money (I am not sure what you mean by this). [/FONT]
Please correct it and send me your valuable advice.:)

What you have written is very clear. I have made a few small suggestions but it is fine as it is.
My advice is that you drop out the words "if possible." Just go for it. Good luck!
 
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