Please check the grammar for the following paragraph

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It is a paragraph about the essential meaning of architecure, I have troubles using the right punctuation
thankyou .

In common sense, the basis of architecture is just solid buildings mixed up with bricks, stones and woods. Yet this is true that all forms of architecture do shall the similar functions as storage, protection and sheltering. Beyond those cold and symmetrical walls, however, there lays the exuberant imagination of the artists; architecture has its very own avidities as celebrating humanity, revealing humanistic civilization, or depict spirituality. From ancient clay building, to great Renaissance to the modern 21th century; from East Asian bamboo, to Islamic world to the Roman Plaster; during decades of era, architecture stands there, revealing the most beautiful human artistry.

 

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I am not a teacher but will try to help.

In common sense, the basis of architecture is just solid buildings mixed up with bricks, stones and woods. Yet it is true that all forms of architecture do show similar functions, such as as storage, protection and sheltering. Beyond those cold and symmetrical walls, however, lays the exuberant imagination of the artists; architecture has its very own avidities as celebrating humanity, revealing humanistic civilization, or depict spirituality. From ancient clay buildings, to great Renaissance to the modern 21th century; from East Asian bamboo, to Islamic world to the Roman Plaster; during decades of era, architecture stands there, revealing the most beautiful human artistry.