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    Default Correct my grammar

    1. I was participated on projects of creative workshop, to create animations,
    multimedia and web presentations.

    2. If i work practice somewhere, I'm " Trainee" or how to write it.

    3. Final exam to graduate or Final exam to earn BC Degree, what is good ?

    4. Providing internet services to local customers

    5. Maintenance of network equipment under supervision

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    Default Re: Correct my grammar

    Not a teacher
    Quote Originally Posted by darco View Post
    1. I was participated on projects of creative workshop, to create animations,multimedia and web presentations.
    I participated in some projects of a creative workshop to create animations, multimedia and web presentation
    Quote Originally Posted by darco View Post
    2. If i work practice somewhere, I'm " Trainee" or how to write it.
    You are a trainee if you are taught how to do a particular job (or you practice working in a particular place)
    Quote Originally Posted by darco View Post
    3. Pass the Final exam to graduate or Final exam to earn BC Degree, what is good ?
    I think both are acceptable.
    Quote Originally Posted by darco View Post
    4. Providing internet services for local customers
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    5. Maintenance of network equipment under supervision
    If this is a noun phrase, you're right, but you can turn this into a sentence: Network equipment should be maintain under supervision.

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