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    your company / company's growth / company's success

    Hi,

    Question:
    I bought a book for job cover letter.
    The following 3 examples are suggested by the book.
    Anyone can give me the 4th and 5th example?


    Sentence:
    I am confident that I can make a valuable contribution to your company / company's growth / company's success.


    Thanks

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    Re: your company / company's growth / company's success

    Why do you need five different ways to say the same thing??

    You can change "company's" to "... of your company." But why?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: your company / company's growth / company's success

    Quote Originally Posted by Barb_D View Post
    Why do you need five different ways to say the same thing??

    You can change "company's" to "... of your company." But why?

    The reason for asking this question is:
    Want to know what can we contribute to a company, apart from growth, success and the company itself.

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    Re: your company / company's growth / company's success

    Quote Originally Posted by uktous View Post
    The reason for asking this question is:
    Want to know what can we contribute to a company, apart from growth, success and the company itself.
    I'd love to see your ideas.

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    Re: your company / company's growth / company's success

    Quote Originally Posted by bhaisahab View Post
    I'd love to see your ideas.
    restructuring, product innovation, and enlargement

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