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    Could you correct this text please :

    They are true that people do not understand science. In spite of the last technological advanced, they havenít succeeded in acquiring a scientific spirit. In the everyday life, the essential factors of this scientific spirit are ignored. Undoubtedly that the various methods of teaching are at the origin of the problem. Indeed, the pupil learns without means of intervening on the result of a long series of stages however essential. Vis-a-vis a teaching without explanations, the pupil does not manage to think what was undertaken to arrive at this discovery. He escapes knowledge and the elements to arrive at the result thus its creativity does not manage to gather is limited.

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    Hello,

    I've underlined the parts that need to be changed.

    Quote Originally Posted by free00

    They are true that people do not understand science. In spite of the last technological advanced, they havenít succeeded in acquiring a scientific spirit. In the everyday life, the essential factors of this scientific spirit are ignored. Undoubtedly that the various methods of teaching are at the origin of the problem. Indeed, the pupil learns without means of intervening on the result of a long series of stages however essential. Vis-a-vis a teaching without explanations, the pupil does not manage to think what was undertaken to arrive at this discovery. He escapes knowledge and the elements to arrive at the resultthus its creativity does not manage to gather is limited.

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    Quote Originally Posted by free00 View Post
    They are true that people do not understand science.
    Say:
    It is true that people do not understand science.
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    Quote Originally Posted by free00 View Post
    In spite of the last technological advanced, they havenít succeeded in acquiring a scientific spirit. In the everyday life, the essential factors of this scientific spirit are ignored.
    In spite of the latest scientific advances, they haven't succeded in acquiring a scientific spirit. In everyday life, the essential factors of this scientific spirit are ignored.

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    Quote Originally Posted by free00 View Post
    Undoubtedly that the various methods of teaching are at the origin of the problem.
    Undoubtedly, the various methods of teaching are at the origin of the problem.
    Quote Originally Posted by free00 View Post
    Indeed, the pupil learns without means of intervening on the result of a long series of stages however essential. Vis-a-vis a teaching without explanations, the pupil does not manage to think what was undertaken to arrive at this discovery. He escapes knowledge and the elements to arrive at the result thus its creativity does not manage to gather is limited.

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