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    AryanK is offline Newbie
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    Default Can someone please read my introduction paragraph to my essay?

    Hey everyone

    I'm writing a 800 words essay on Baltic Sea Region Farming, and I've finished the introduction paragraph, but I have a feeling that something's not right there. Can you please read it and tell me what you think? Suggestions and error reports are welcome! :)
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    Default Re: Can someone please read my introduction paragraph to my essay?

    Hi Gill,

    I don't understand why its needs a bracket (I use the right word?) like this: its'? I think it is: Its + noun?

    Can you explain to me? I used Google but I could not find the answer.

    Trung.

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    Default Re: Can someone please read my introduction paragraph to my essay?

    Thanks a lot for the help, Gillnetter! You're a great teacher. :)

    I don't understand the its' issue either though.

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