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    Please teacher help me out, in rephrasing this statement, i use this often and its becoming monotonous.

    'Dear Customer,

    Our iDirect Modem at Lagos Nigeria branch was powered down at 11:00am.
    Kindly take note'.

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    Default Re: Sentence formation

    There really aren't many ways you can put that sentence differently since the bulk of the sentence carries key information.

    Perhaps:

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    Please be informed, our iDirect Modem at Lagos Nigeria branch was shut down at 11:00am.

    Thank you.

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    What is the customer supposed to do with this information?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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