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    Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    1) My job responsibility is to link up Malaysian students with foreign students.
    2) I want to link up/connect the two of them.

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    Re: Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) My job responsibility is to link up Malaysian students with foreign students.
    2) I want to link up/connect the two of them.
    What do you mean by 'link/connect up'?
    How do you 'link up' student A with student B?

    physical link-up with cables? facilitate communication? foster interaction?

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    Re: Can somebody help me correct these sentences?

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) My job responsibility is to link up Malaysian students with foreign students.
    2) I want to link up the two groups.
    3) I want to bring the two groups together.

    "connect" is not a good verb here.

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