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    Default Someone correcting my article please?

    Here's the task, thanks in anticipation to everyone who'll help:
    "Tell us about a leisure-time activity you really enjoy" (how did you get started? Why do you enjoy it so much?)

    A NEW PHOTOGRAPHER'S AROUND

    I first got interested in photography about a year ago.
    I was going to Naples for a school trip, and my mum bought me a digital camera because she wanted me to take pictures of the city and the monuments to show to her.
    I had never even thought about taking photographs before, it was a totally new thing to me.
    Now, it has became an obsession. There are days in which I just go out and about with the camera in my pocket, in order to catch the right light, or a beautiful view, or a sunset.
    Taking photographs of nice things is but too easy.
    The greatest challenge is immortaling common objects and make them appear wonderful.
    It's just too satisfying when a friend of yours sees a picture of a hammer, or a stair, or a bed, and says it's pretty.
    I can also edit my photographs with a pc programme, and change their colours, their light, rotate them.
    It's so funny and creative that I think I'll never give up this hobby.

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    Default Re: Someone correcting my article please?

    Quote Originally Posted by Martz View Post
    Here's the task, thanks in anticipation to everyone who'll help:
    "Tell us about a leisure-time activity you really enjoy" (how did you get started? Why do you enjoy it so much?)

    A NEW PHOTOGRAPHER'S AROUND

    I first got interested in photography about a year ago.
    I was going to Naples on a school trip, and my mum bought me a digital camera because she wanted me to take pictures of the city and the monuments to show her.
    I had never even thought about taking photographs before, it was a totally new thing to me.
    Now, it has became an obsession. There are days in which I just go out and about with the camera in my pocket, in order to catch the right light, or a beautiful view, or a sunset.
    Taking photographs of nice things is but too easy.
    The greatest challenge is making out of common objects immortal images and make them appear wonderful.
    It's just too satisfying when a friend of yours sees a picture of a hammer, or a stair, or a bed, and says it's pretty.
    I can also edit my photographs using a pc programme, and change their colours, their light, rotate them.
    It's so funny and creative that I think I'll never give this hobby up.
    Hi, there
    I have corrected only a few minor mistakes. Well written!

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    Default Re: Someone correcting my article please?

    that's great! thanks :)

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