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    fiatlux Guest

    Default I need help on a sentence please

    Hello,

    I hope I'm posting this in the right place. My mother tongue isn't English and I'm applying for an internship in a firm, and I need to write my resume in English. I would really appreciated if a native speaker could tell me if the following sentence is correct:

    (under the "Objective" section of my resume)
    To join a well-experienced team and put into practice my academic knowledge by sharing my creativity and strong interest in research and development of state-of-the-art products.

    --> Are there any mistakes? Would you say that differently? Also, I'm not sure if I should rather say "interested in THE research and development of state-of-the-art products"...?

    Thanks in advance!

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Default Re: I need help on a sentence please

    I'd say 'the research...'

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