Hi everyone, kindly ask if you can please help me with the following. Below is an excerpt from my essay that I require some assistance with as my teacher advised me to avoid using these types of sentences.
"It is also criticised that the women are not treated equally."
My teacher suggested that I change it to:
"It is also a criticism that the women are not treated equally."
Aprarently it is quite important to master this but I don't understand why?
Would greatly appreciate any help!
"It is also criticised that the women are not treated equally."
My teacher suggested that I change it to:
"It is also a criticism that the women are not treated equally."
Aprarently it is quite important to master this but I don't understand why?
Would greatly appreciate any help!