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    Question Rephrasing

    "He forces himself to lessen his own care of good." How can I rephrase that sentence to make it sound better or more correct?

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    Default Re: Rephrasing

    Quote Originally Posted by KrissyCole View Post
    "He forces himself to lessen his own care of good." How can I rephrase that sentence to make it sound better or more correct?
    I'm afraid I don't actually understand what you mean by that sentence, which makes it difficult to help.

    Could you post some alternatives that you think might work, so that we get a better idea of what you mean? Thanks.

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