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    gauri_agr is offline Member
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    hi all,


    please let me know the grammar mistakes in this English passage


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    One of my friends was supposed to go to some movie at one of the weekend. She was married recently. After a day or two I called her up to ask about the date with her husband. She took in a deep breath and said that half of the movie she watched alone as her husband had been out side after getting a phone call from his boss and rest half they both were silence. After reaching home silence broke off into good fight.



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    Default Re: date of my friend

    Quote Originally Posted by gauri_agr View Post
    hi all,


    please let me know the grammar mistakes in this English passage


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    One of my friends was supposed to go to some movie at one of the weekend. She was married recently. After a day or two I called her up to ask about the date with her husband. She took in a deep breath and said that half of the movie she watched alone as her husband had been out side after getting a phone call from his boss and rest half they both were silence. After reaching home silence broke off into good fight.



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    1. Combine the first two sentences: One of my friends who was recently married...
    2. to some move/to a movie
    3. at one weekend/one weekend
    4. two, (prepositional phrase is introducing=followed by a comma)
    5. been outside talking on the phone with his boss.
    6. The rest....silent (silence)
    7. home, (same as #4) broke

    Sounds like an interesting scenario! Hope this helps you out.

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    Default Re: date of my friend

    Thanks a lot Lady Hawk. Could you please clarify my doubts here...

    1. I am unable to understand the point 4.


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    Gauri

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