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    Smile sentences correction

    Dear teacher,

    Are the following two sentences acceptable?
    If not, please correct them.

    1. I want to experience the firsthand taste from real life in Istanbul,
    Turkey.

    2. I have high expectations of the tour of Turkey.

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    Re: sentences correction

    Quote Originally Posted by contiluo View Post
    Dear teacher,

    Are the following two sentences acceptable?
    If not, please correct them.

    1. I want to experience the firsthand taste from real life in Istanbul,
    Turkey.

    2. I have high expectations of the tour of Turkey.
    1. I want to experience life in Istanbul, Turkey, firsthand.
    OR
    I would like to have/get firsthand experience of life in Istanbul, Turkey.

    2. Your sentence is correct.

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