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    supax99 Guest

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    Is this a good thesis statment "All across North America bikers are being denied access to public parks because they are said to cause damage and increase collisions, this is not true and should not be supported."

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    Quote Originally Posted by supax99
    Is this a good thesis statment "All across North America bikers are being denied access to public parks because they are said to cause damage and increase collisions, this is not true and should not be supported."
    The sentence is not bad but how can the bikers cause collisions in public parks? Unless they are chasing possums and racoons on "squirrel" highways
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    All across North America, bikers are being denied access to public parks as they are said to cause damage and accidents. This opinion is false and should not be supported.

    PS. just to make sure: you are talking about motorcycles, right?

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