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    Please check these two sentences

    It has business potential because it reaches mass of all class

    The success of the brand depends on its instant connection with customers

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    #2

    Re: Please check these two sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    It has business potential because it reaches mass of all class

    The success of the brand depends on its instant connection with customers
    It has business potential because it reaches a wide range of people from all classes of society. That's my suggestion.

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