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    business letter

    sir i have written the below mentioned letter yesterday to our concern bank, can you analyze the grammar of this letter and any other sugestion.

    26th April 2010



    To,
    The Manager
    Habib Metropolitan Bank Ltd.
    Head Office
    Spencer's Building
    I.I Chundrigar Road
    Karachi, Pakistan


    Ref: Research & Development Claim

    Dear Sir,

    We are providing copy of original registration certificate of RDA Cell Ministry of Textile Industry in order to release 60% remaining R&D Claims.

    We request you to release remaining 60% R&D Claim.

    Please do the needful at your earliest.

    Thanking you
    Yours truly,



    For Shahi Textiles


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    Re: business letter

    Quote Originally Posted by noman12 View Post
    sir i have written the below mentioned letter yesterday to our concern bank, can you analyze the grammar of this letter and any other sugestion.

    26th April 2010



    To,
    The Manager
    Habib Metropolitan Bank Ltd.
    Head Office
    Spencer's Building
    I.I Chundrigar Road
    Karachi, Pakistan


    Ref: Research & Development Claim

    Dear Sir,

    Attached is a copy of the original registration certificate of RDA Cell Ministry of Textile Industry, in order to request the release of the remaining 60% R&D Claims.

    We request that you to release the remaining 60% R&D Claims.

    Please do the needful take the necessary action at your earliest convenience.

    Thanking you
    Yours truly faithfully,



    For Shahi Textiles
    See amendments above.

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