“Advances (advancement?) in transportation and communication like the airplane and telephone have changed the way people interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.”
Since we are living in Informational century information age,
therea lot of technological innovations werehave been invented in order to make easierglobal connections easier. One of the most vital innovations is the internet which was invented in twentieth century and developed in current century. It is very bizarre (bizarre has negative connotations. use xtraordinary/remarkable/marvellous/phenomenal) and incredible innovation because of its several beneficial benefits and advantageous sides advantages
First and foremost, the internet is an important tool to make connections with all sides of the Earth. There are a lot of facilities to help us
tomake links towith each other. One of them is the e-mail, which makesprovides the opportunity for us to send and receive letters from our friends or colleagues in a few timesinstantly. For instance, someone works in a big and prestigious company and he /she(you can use 'he' to represent 'general') needs to send important information, such as meeting time, to his/ hercolleague. In this case, the e-mail opportunityis very useful for everybody. In addition, everybody can utilize the internet to earn money in order to create a new web site.( I thought it is the other way round - you create the website to earn money) By increasing the visitor(number of visits) to his /herweb site, the creator can take percentage(get a commission) from the internet. On the other hand, there are a lot of trading web sites available towhich enable the creators to earn money. All bank systems are working withmake use of the internet to send and receive money from other bankstransfer money between banks. The internet makes their work seasier and decrease the delivery times of sending and receiving moneyand so much faster.
Finally, we can get hot the latest news from the internet on about everything, such as daily news, political, sport news - whenever we want and whereever we want. Since it was invented wireless transmission was invented
connection opportunitieswe have been able to use internet practically everywhere. And moreover it makes us availableenables us to have access to getinformation about everything everyat any time.[/FONT][/SIZE]
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In conclusion, I would like to sum up
and summarize againthat the internet is one of the greatest and most important innovations which makes our live s easyeasier because of its several facilities various applications which benefit and impact all aspects of our life. Some of the applications such as the e-mail, earning money being a source of income and getting news instant news transmission are very vital opportunities for everybody to make their life easier makes a great difference to improving our lives.
Note: Internet comes with the article 'the'.
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