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    In a movie called Mississippi Burning, a group of racists murder some black people but they get a way with their crimes with the help of the local police, some of them who are members of the Ku klux Klan organization. And then federal agents put on the case to investigate the incident but no one cooperates with them because racism dominates many aspects of society though it is not legal but laws can not repeal what people believe and what's taught to kids in their early ages, those pure souls who come to life with an innate love.
    However, the silence of society is soon to be broken by one of KKK members' wives who cooperates with investigators only after her sudden awakening of conscience after these awful crimes.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Over the top View Post
    In a movie called Mississippi Burning, a group of racists murder some black people but they get a way with their crimes with the help of the local police, some of them who whom are members of the Ku Klux Klan organization. And then when federal agents put on take on the case to investigate the incident, but no one cooperates with them because racism dominates many aspects of society though it is not legal but laws can not cannot repeal what people believe and what's taught to kids in their early ages years, those pure souls who come to life this world with an innate love.
    However, the silence of society is soon to be broken by one of KKK member's wives wife who cooperates with the investigators only after her sudden awakening of conscience after these awful crimes.
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