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    Smile Opinion composition

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    Computer - one of the most modern technology XXI century. All people have at least one computer at home. However increasing use of computers gives not just advantages but disadvantages.
    I think that computer have more positive effects than negative one. First, it help faster to do homeworks. You do not clutter up a room with books. Computer programmes are English language therefore it help to enrich our vocabulary. Finally, an online computer support phone and TV funcions.
    Other people have a different point of view about increasing use of computers. Doctors say that the computer is harmful to our eyes and spine. Psychologists argue that children become dependent on the computer. Specialists in Lithuanian philology claims that children from an early age speak and write wrongly, because a lot of programmes do not use lithuanian alphabet.
    In conclusion, I think that people should use computers moderately. Then they will avoid the negative consequences.

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    Re: Opinion composition

    Quote Originally Posted by Vasare View Post
    I would appreciate if someone correct my letter.


    Computer is one of the most modern technology XXI century. All people have at least one computer at home. However, the increasing use of computers has both advantages and disadvantages.
    I think that computer have has more positive effects than negative ones. First, it helps faster to do homeworks quickly. You do not have to clutter up a room with books.

    Computer programmes are in English language, therefore it helps to enrich our vocabulary. Finally, an online computer supports phone and TV funcions.

    Others people have a different point of view about the increasing use of computers. Doctors say that the computer is harmful to our eyes and spine. Psychologists argue that children become dependent on the computer. Specialists in Lithuanian philology claims that children from an early age speak and write wrongly, because a lot of programmes do not use lithuanian alphabet.
    In conclusion, I think that people should use computers moderately. Then So that they will avoid the negative consequences.

    Good Luck !

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    Re: Opinion composition

    Thank you very much

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