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    robin lee is offline Newbie
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    please check this paragraph

    i want to send an email to thank my co-worker: Thank you.


    Mary, thank you for your offer to help. I will speak to my boss about it so in the meanwhile, please hold off talking to our manager.

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    Re: please check this paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by robin lee View Post
    i want to send an email to thank my co-worker: Thank you.


    Mary, thank you very much for your offer to help. But I will tell my boss about it myself. So, please don't bother to do it for me at the moment.
    (Not a teacher)

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    Re: please check this paragraph

    Is "my boss" the same person as "our manager"?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Question Re: please check this paragraph

    Hi to all

    I am going to send a letter to Insurance Office about My New postal Address.
    Please help me with correcting grammars.

    My Letter Contains:
    ================================================== ===
    To,


    Office Address
    .......
    Insurance Policy No.: 1563535/03

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I have recently moved and I would like to change my address. My details are as follows:

    Previous Address:

    Old Postal Address Details


    Present Address:
    Current Postal Address Details.

    I respectfully request you to change my address in your records for further communications.
    Finally, I did not get the any letters from the Office. The second letter dispatched on March 2010. I hold that at my old address till May 10, 2010.If it is possible. please, resend the letter in above mention address.

    I am waiting for mail/letter in new address.
    Thank You.
    Sincerely
    abc
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