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    happys82 is offline Member
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    please,correct my mistakes.

    Our studentsí nutrition is monitored in the best way and itís supplied in a sanitary way by considering a daily calorie intake. We take care about the cleaning and hygiene. Blankets are changed in two weeks, rooms and halls are cleaned every day.
    City trips, picnics, sketches, sport and game tournaments and some other social activities are organized to help students enjoy their lives here in the dormitory. Students have the opportunity to watch world's best seller movies by the organization of our cinema club every week on a certain day.According to our students' interest the national matches are watched at the cinema and conference halls on a giant screen.

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    Re: please,correct my mistakes.

    Our students’ nutrition is monitored in the best way and it’s supplied in a sanitary way by considering a daily calorie intake.
    The sentence sounds very odd. It seems like the meals are being prescribed by a nutritionist like in a hospital.

    We ensure our students are provided with meals that are balanced, nutritious and hygienically prepared.

    not a teacher

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    Re: please,correct my mistakes.

    Thank you very much and the next paragraph:
    ... Even in the sports world, German-speaking part is manifesting itself.In Football World Cup history, Germany has participated in the final more than other countries and Brazil has become a country, that only won more than others.
    Therefore,German is taught as a second foreign language in our schools.The tenth grade student A1 level, the eleventh grade student A2 level and the twelfth grade student can get B1 level according to the European standards. Our school teaches German by taking ďCommon European Framework of Reference for LanguagesĒ as a main model.

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