vane.jensen
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hi!
can somebody help me with my application letter, i'm trying to go to the staes to acience camp and i don't know if what i wrote it is ok.
in the letter i have to write my abilities ans reasons to go...
this is the letter, please help me to correct it
To the Embassy of the United States
Dear Sirs:
It is a great pleasure to write to you and at first I introduce myself.
I am Vanessa Jensen. I study at San Agustín school in Antofagasta. I want to go to the National Youth Science Camp because I think that is a great opportunity to learn about interesting things such as astronomy, chemical, physics, math and others things about science, from other students from other countries. I think that it is a great idea to make a camp about science, because I want to study astronomy, so I would like to learn more things about that and about physics.
I am a good student. I have a mark 6.8. I am participating in the national math championship, and the last year I won a bronze medal. Also, the last year I won a gold medal in the regional math Olympics.
When I was studying in the basic school, I was selected to participate in a special course called DeLTA in the Catholic University of the North, and I got success in many subjects, like architecture. In that subject I won a special prize as the best student of the class and for that reason I got a gold medal.
When I finished the primary school, I received a special prize for been the best student, because I obtained marks 7.0.
Well those are the reasons because of I want to go to the NYSC. …
regards
Vanessa Jensen
can somebody help me with my application letter, i'm trying to go to the staes to acience camp and i don't know if what i wrote it is ok.
in the letter i have to write my abilities ans reasons to go...
this is the letter, please help me to correct it
To the Embassy of the United States
Dear Sirs:
It is a great pleasure to write to you and at first I introduce myself.
I am Vanessa Jensen. I study at San Agustín school in Antofagasta. I want to go to the National Youth Science Camp because I think that is a great opportunity to learn about interesting things such as astronomy, chemical, physics, math and others things about science, from other students from other countries. I think that it is a great idea to make a camp about science, because I want to study astronomy, so I would like to learn more things about that and about physics.
I am a good student. I have a mark 6.8. I am participating in the national math championship, and the last year I won a bronze medal. Also, the last year I won a gold medal in the regional math Olympics.
When I was studying in the basic school, I was selected to participate in a special course called DeLTA in the Catholic University of the North, and I got success in many subjects, like architecture. In that subject I won a special prize as the best student of the class and for that reason I got a gold medal.
When I finished the primary school, I received a special prize for been the best student, because I obtained marks 7.0.
Well those are the reasons because of I want to go to the NYSC. …
regards
Vanessa Jensen