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    Default Pl. help me take look at this

    I made a translation of a chinese old saying to English, I'm not sure if it make sense to native speakers.

    "- Virtue brings happiness;
    - Happiness brings permanence."

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Default Re: Pl. help me take look at this

    It makes sense to me. You might want to use 'and' in the middle instead of the semi-colon.

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    Default Re: Pl. help me take look at this

    Tks a lot, Tdol!

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