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    #1

    Pl. help me take look at this

    I made a translation of a chinese old saying to English, I'm not sure if it make sense to native speakers.

    "- Virtue brings happiness;
    - Happiness brings permanence."

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    #2

    Re: Pl. help me take look at this

    It makes sense to me. You might want to use 'and' in the middle instead of the semi-colon.


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    #3

    Re: Pl. help me take look at this

    Tks a lot, Tdol!

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