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    Default commerial ad

    Can someone proofread this commerical ad speech? It's going to be a 30sec AD. This is actually my first time making a commerical speech.

    Are you looking for a course but still aren't accepted in?
    Well here at Southbank Tafe we will gladly accept you into our campus!
    Our programs will help you get into university, get a job or improve your skills.
    To find out more or to enroll just simple call us on 1800 654 447.

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    Default Re: commerial ad

    Are you looking for a course but still aren't accepted in?- but still haven't got a place/been accepted
    we will gladly accept you into our campus!- we will gladly accept you!
    just simple call - simply call

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