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    rosma is offline Newbie
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    Talking Please check this short paragraph!^^

    My friend's birthday is coming so i want to send him a message in English.
    Thank you very much for spending time reading, checking and fixing it for me!
    Thank you!

    Hello oppa! How are you? I know your answer! But please this time donít say you are fine, ok? Just be science, please!

    25 years is slowly going by. That means 300 months, 1.330 weeks, 9.313 days, 223.512 hours, 13.410.720 minutes and 804.643.200 have passed away.

    You standing there, working hard, laughing brightly, crying when you canít control your feeling but you are you and that why we - all of your fans, your family, your best friends Ė always love you and always by your side. Turning around and youíll see.

    And I still try to keep following as much as I can. Iím so scared that I canít keep up you but I wonít give up!!

    Believe in us, ok!^^

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    Default Re: Please check this short paragraph!^^

    Please! Somebody help me! Thank you so mcuh!^^

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    Default Re: Please check this short paragraph!^^

    Thank you ! Thank you very much!

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