Atchan
Key Member
- Joined
- Apr 30, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Somali
- Home Country
- Somalia
- Current Location
- Saudi Arabia
I want to improve my english skills so put he some sentences so help me by correcting them. thanx:-D
1- Peter was intending to go to France but when he heard about the volcanic smoke that happened in Greece last few weeks he abolished his travel to France and stayed with his friends cause some of them leaved the country.
2- Tom is going with his friends to a special entertainment center so I told him to be cautious and aware that he is an adult not a kid and avoid every harmful thing.
3- Our labor ordered from us to increase his fee because he got married and his parents were sick so he needed to get enough money to put them the hospital.
1- Peter was intending to go to France but when he heard about the volcanic smoke that happened in Greece last few weeks he abolished his travel to France and stayed with his friends cause some of them leaved the country.
2- Tom is going with his friends to a special entertainment center so I told him to be cautious and aware that he is an adult not a kid and avoid every harmful thing.
3- Our labor ordered from us to increase his fee because he got married and his parents were sick so he needed to get enough money to put them the hospital.