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    Default Dark Sea

    Hi, please tell me about the correctness of the following sentence. Thanks.

    Is she a fathomless dark ocean or an inexplicable myth or a supercilious shrew or a benevolent ’Amma’?

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    Default Re: Dark Sea

    It looks OK but replace the first 2 "or's" with commas.

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