[General] Dark Sea

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Easwar Arumugam

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Hi, please tell me about the correctness of the following sentence. Thanks.

Is she a fathomless dark ocean or an inexplicable myth or a supercilious shrew or a benevolent ’Amma’?
 

billmcd

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It looks OK but replace the first 2 "or's" with commas.
 
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