uktous
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 7, 2009
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Japanese
- Home Country
- Japan
- Current Location
- UK
Hi,
Question1:
Do the following 2 sentences have the same meaning?
Question2:
Is sentence 2 better than sentence 1 ,because of fewer comma?
Sentence1:
For example, when I was a clerk, I was responsible for replying to emails, and in the first year of my BSc, I received 70 marks for a project about company share.
Sentence2:
For example, I was responsible for replying to emails when I was a clerk, and l received 70 marks for a project about company shares in the first year of my BSc.
Thanks
Question1:
Do the following 2 sentences have the same meaning?
Question2:
Is sentence 2 better than sentence 1 ,because of fewer comma?
Sentence1:
For example, when I was a clerk, I was responsible for replying to emails, and in the first year of my BSc, I received 70 marks for a project about company share.
Sentence2:
For example, I was responsible for replying to emails when I was a clerk, and l received 70 marks for a project about company shares in the first year of my BSc.
Thanks